Bonsoir voici mon devoir, Merci d’avance

Bonjour! Voici ma version corrigée.
Hello everyone*!
I’m introducing myself*
I’m 47 years old*
I work*
For 23 years old*
Also, I have a dog and two cats*
Their names are*
My neighbor is my best friend*
I know him since*
Same tastes*
For music and movie*
I think*
Who wants to protect*
We meet everyday*
To find solutions*
We are going*
Our bikes*
In the morning*
Comes*
Every Tuesday
He makes*
For lunches*
He eats with me*
My friend is very nice*
We are cool guys*

Si vous repérez d’autres fautes n’hésitez pas à les corriger.
Passez une très bonne soirée.